导语 introduction
本文是稻田诗社社长林兮小同志想要向同伴们分享时所撰写的发言稿,配图均为她自己所画。她也是我在开篇文提及的颜色派的小诗人,一起讨论诗歌时常常语出惊人。很开心诗歌已经成为了她生命的一部分,让我们先简单跟着她一起感受一下属于她诗歌理解吧!--毛露老师
This article is a speech written by Liana Linxi, president of Paddy Poetry Club, when she wanted to share it with her peers. The pictures are all drawn by herself. She is also a little poet of the color school that I mentioned in the opening article. She often speaks amazingly when discussing poetry together. I'm very happy that poetry has become a part of her life. Let's simply follow her and feel her understanding of poetry. --Teacher MaoLu
大家好,我是林兮!
Hello every one,I am Linxi。
每次,你悲伤、烦躁时,又或是有所感悟时,你会怎么做呢?是撕开薯片的包装开始大口大口的吃?是找到身边一件便宜的东西往地上砸?在半夜三更把自己蒙在被子里偷偷的哭泣?还是打开自己的朋友圈,写上几个字,配上许久才找到的一张唯美图片?
What do you do every time you are sad, upset, or feel something? Did you rip the package of potato chips and start munching? Is to find a cheap thing around you and throw it on the ground? Quietly crying in the middle of the night? Or open your own circle of friends, write a few words, and match it with a beautiful picture that took a long time to find?
在座的各位在有情绪时会用写诗来表达的,请举一下手。(举手画面请脑补)。接下来,我希望通过诗社 “万物诗” 的活动,来让大家尝试写诗。
Do you people in this room will write poems to express their emotions? Please raise your hand. (Please make up your brain for the picture of raising your hand). Next, I hope that i can lead us try to write poetry through the activity of "All Things Poetry" of the poetry club.
现在,请各位配合我,闭上眼,用30秒时间想象一下你正在写作业或是工作的场景,可以是赶作业,也可以是因为deadline就在明天而工作到凌晨,又或者是其他的什么东西,都可以。(30秒间断请脑补)
Now, please cooperate with me, close your eyes, and imagine for 30 seconds the scene where you are doing your homework or working, whether it's catching up on your homework, or working until midnight because the deadline is tomorrow, or anything else.
好了,请大家睁开眼,现在你的脑海中是否浮现出了一些东西?请用想到的任意的词语在纸上写下来,至少5个。
Ok, please open your eyes. Is there something in your mind now? Please write down any words you can think of on the paper, at least five.
这些词语是否有让你感受到什么?如果大家还是不太清楚,我可以举一个自己写过的例子:
Do these words make you feel anything? If you still don't know, I can give you an example that I have written:
Tell A Lie
谎
你用力地拥抱着我的时候 When you hugged me hard
将我剖肠开肚 You cut my belly open
现在是否让大家有那么一点点感觉了?(虽然胖虫子一度建议她不要用这个略带阴暗的例子,但随心就好哈)现在请大家写下来吧,只需直观的将各位的想法写下来便可以了,不需要任何华丽的词藻,也不需要你有任何的逻辑。可以更加抽象一点点,不用过于具象。(3分钟间断请脑补)现在有人想要分享一下自己的诗句嘛?(互动请脑补)
Does it make everyone feel a little bit now? (Although Fat Bug once advised her not to use this slightly dark example, it's good to follow her heart.) Now please write it down, just write down your ideas intuitively, without any flowery words or any logic from you. It can be a little more abstract, not too concrete.Now, does anyone want to share their verses?
写诗是否是一件很简单的事情呢?你知道只有你一个人可以做到这些事,可以说出这些话,因为这是你的世界,你是王,是造物主,你可以定义你世界里的万物。
Is it a very simple thing to write poetry? You know that only you can do these things and say these words, because this is your world, you are the king and the creator, and you can define everything in your world.
在诗的世界里,不需要任何解释,你只要大大方方的把自己想告诉别人的,展示出来,就自然会有人说道:“ 诶,我也有这样的感觉。” 这何尝不是一件美好的事?
In the world of poetry, you don't need any explanation. As long as you show what you want to tell others generously, someone will naturally say, "Hey, I feel the same way." Isn't this a wonderful thing?
春天,我赢了呢
我想在下雪的时候发芽
发芽给你看
做倔强而且无谓的抵抗
即便现在还是十二月
是冰雪飘摇的十二月
我想在灰色的天气开花
开花给她看
做虚弱而且愚蠢的支撑
即便是一月
是冰冻的一月
我想在大风的天气结果
结果给自己看
做无力而且无助的反抗
即便是二月
只有二十八天的二月
现在三月了
百花齐放、鸟语花香
我却只有枯萎了
然后我笑着说:
啊,春天
我赢了呢
现在我想讲一些关于自己的事情。
我曾经也不曾接触过诗,知道的只有一句“面朝大海,春暖花开”,我也曾因为这个而梦想着一座海边的房子。我真正接触诗是因为我们的科学老师。他将我带进了诗的世界,我很庆幸遇见了这位老师,也很庆幸我遇见了诗。
我现在想用诗讲一个故事给大家听,不知道你们能不能猜出我说得到底是什么:
周记
周六 夜 无云
我得努力的让头竖着
这样
我才能开出花来
周日 午 阴雨
今天我需要踮脚
因为盛开在水上
矮小的动物
会被淹死
周一 早 晴空
张开双臂
我抱不住我自己
今日我身上挂满苔藓
希望有鸟在我头顶下蛋
周五 夜 闪电
果然还是不明白
那些不明生物
为什么要用那种恐惧的目光看着我
明明我是这个星球上仅剩的蘑菇了。
诗既可以讲故事,也可以问问题(这是稻田诗社另一个“问题诗”活动的选的一些句子):
乒乓球会在肚子里生长吗?
我扎辫子用的樱桃头绳
是不是从我的头皮里长出来的?
西瓜爆炸的时候
是不是正是一朵花的盛开?
所谓“宝藏”就是这样的东西吧!
村上春树说:“喜欢到全世界森林的老虎都化成黄油。” 在座的各位是否有过这样的喜欢?痖弦说:“秋天什么也没留下/只留下一个暖暖/只留下一个暖暖/一切便都留下了”余光中说:“当夏季死时,所有的莲都殉情。”
Haruki Murakami said, "Tiger Hwa-Sung Do butter, which likes to go to forests all over the world." Have all of you here ever liked it like this? Ya Xian said, "There's nothing left in autumn/only a warmth/only a warmth/everything is left." Yu Guangzhong said, "When summer dies, all the lotus flowers die for double suicide."
当你在阅读着诗,写着诗时,当有什么东西让你产生共鸣时,会感觉自己得到了天下最美好的礼物。所谓中二病,不存在的;妄想,不存在的;疯狂,也不存在的。
When you are reading and writing poems, when something resonates with you, you will feel that you have got the best gift in the world. The so-called second disease does not exist; Delusion, nonexistent; Crazy doesn't exist either.
在诗的世界,我可以告诉我自己:
In the world of poetry, I can tell myself:
我知道春天来了
I know that spring is coming
因为我
Because I
即为春日
Am the spring day
谢谢大家!
Thank you!